Thursday, December 10, 2009

the mysterious eyes.............[4]


[HEY FRIENDS THIS IS THE LAST PART OF MY STORY.OTHER PARTS CAN BE READ IN THE EARLIER POSTS]



IT WAS GOING TO BE THE END OF MY LIFE................

AAAAAA!!!!!!!! i woke up!!!!!!! my mother was again....sitting beside me.......

water!!!!!!!!water ...........my mother brought the glass of cold water hastily...........and i drank the same manner...[hastily]........dear maria what had happened to you..................i found you fainted..........again....................you told me.........that you were going for a walk...but how you fainted......?????.....that time i could not able to utter a word as i was very nervous and scared then..........

WELL DEAR HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!

HEY!!!!!!!!yeah today was 30.5.09.and my pretty birthday.........i jumped out of the bed...and turned the calender..........yippppppppppeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!........but the smile faded from my face as the dream of that old woman......with the mysterious silver eyes.........was..........oh god..........


i went for a bath........and wore my loveliest frock..........eating my breakfast......including s of juice and my favourite yummy desert....butterscotch..............


Maria.....................yes!!!! mom.........beta,i am busy for the preparations for your birthday party tonight...........go and give invitation cards to you friends......... .....i took my basket and purse.......and went off

i plucked some.....flowers and ...............put them in my basket........then again.......

M...A...R..I...A...... fainted...voice of......that old woman of my dreams....was coming forward........i rubbed..my ..eyes but this time i was not dreaming........that old woman.......started speaking to me.........

I AM MIKOYAN....I WAS SEARCHING for you...........i want you to tell something........come with me........i followed her like a tail.........she stopped near a church.........MARIA......come ,......come maria......but........but.[i spoke feebly]..........don't be afraid come come here........we entered inside the church............MIKOYAN.......BROUGHT AN ANCIENT PHOTOGRAPH......CLEANING IT....she showed it to me................

 I SCREAMED..in a shock...............AAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!......IT WAS MY PHOTOGRAPH...............
MIKOYAN it is my photo[ i told her].......but why this photo is signed.??.......Mikol..........[i asked her]

dear Maria.......[.Mikoyan...moved forward.......with her back.....in front of me]






                                                           the story began......


long years ago there was a child.........very beautiful child.....MIKOL.......[she paused]

.........yes Mikoyan proceed.... proceed i am listening.........

Mikol was a small child..........one black Saturday.........she was..............going in search of the food.......and was captured............by the women....of that forest..........

.Mikol had the beautiful pairs of silver eyes......and those women were searching for the same pairs......for their rituals..,,,,,women were in need of the silver eyes...to offer them to their god in the temple of that forest......very.............[.MIKOYAN WAS SOBBING]........they took out the her beautiful eyes harshly....WITH A SCALPEL.....and thrown her.........[Mikoyan screamed].........she died of staving.........she died.........[she screamed again].....and you know Maria......that forest is now.... a YARD....THAT YOU VISITED......


i was almost dead........but why are you telling me??? all this[ i asked]

dear Maria you know mikol was my daughter........a-and when she......it was 30th may that is today, she died....when you were born maria..when you were born.....after her death you were born............!!!!!!

SUDDENLY.................
the woman dissapeared...........i walked around the church........and read.......on the wall. it said,: ''Mikoyan and Mikol two young souls..will remain always in our heart............even after their deaths''






nooooooooo[i screamed]
whom i was talking till now?????

MARIA............MY MOTHER WAS STANDING IN FRONT OF ME.........WHAT HAPPENED....?????..

WHY ARE U HERE in this church .........hmmmm!!!!!!i looked around THE CHURCH their was no one.... and that church was..........filled with the webs.............

my mother took me home......and told me that....this church was destroyed several years...back during a war..................echoes of my mother's voice........can still be heard......the church was.................to.............and why...........................................................[and all]





after the night's party.........i looked myself into the mirror........my silver eyes were.....shining..........brightly..................and the secret story,''the mysterious eyes''...........no longer
continued.........NOW NO DREAM CAN BE SEEN.........AND NO YARD WAS MY  VI SITINGS.....



[hey friends it was the end of the story......i hope you liked it....IN THIS STORY I WAS MARIA.......]



AUTHOR: SHILPI





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