Wednesday, December 9, 2009

THE MYSTERIOUS EYES.....................[3]

 [HEY.....friends below is the 3 part of my story......the 2nd and the 1st parts can be read on my older posts]


hhhh!!!!!!!!.......i saw a dark figure coming towards me.......it was......almost 7:35pm........therefore... i could not judge the figure.......

MARIA..AGAIN..........H!!!h!!!!h!!!!!! the voice was coming closer to me........and closer...and closer......i tried to run but my legs freezed to the ground.......h.....AND.......a tall old woman flashed out......of the dark wearing a white Saree......with red borders.......her back was slightly bended.......and her face was fully and horribly......wrinkled..........she blewed out the candle in her hand...........nothing but her giant SILVER..eyes....could be seen...............,,.......

how did you know my name.........i asked in a slow tone......BUT the old woman said nothing just lightened her candle.......and went off......aaoooooooch!!!!!!! one piece of her white Saree.... tucked to jacket.....but i ignored it...........i could see the woman dissapearing behind the wild trees......i sec!!!!!! THE WILD TREES.............YARD............HMMMMMMM POSTERS.......oh my god she was going the same.......oh god.......[i thought]......then....i followed her.....I started running to catch her soon..................




as soon i reached that yard........where i fainted on seeing those posters......................SHOCKING...........no yard..........no posters.........i huffed in terror.........INSTEAD THE YARD AND THE POSTERS..........there stood a ''LARGE HAUNTED HOUSE''  i was shocked.........i rubbed my eyes again and again.......YES IT IS THAT YARD ONLY WHERE MY BUS DROVE.......ME.....[I THOUGHT CONFIDENTLY].........slowly and slowly i moved forward.......oh!!!!!!! there's that woman....yeah!!!!!! i could see her.........see her.......i ran fastly.......more faster........and faster.......but what??........the house was so.......far.............i moved and the house moved[backward]...........i stopped.there...huffing !!!!!!!! hhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!huh!! huh!!!!!!


i closed my eyes for a moment and MEOW........MEOW...........the voices all over me..........silver eyed CATS COVERED ME............i was about to faint in the terror.........but..........what was that.... that white Saree women again flashed out....but this time she flashed out from; between those cats......

HE HI HIIIIIEEEEEEE...........YOU STUPID GIRL...YOU SILLY PEST.........YOU KNOW WHAT YOU DID....................YOU WERE TYING TO FIGURE OUT THE EYES YOU SAW IN YOUR DREAMS AND WHILE WALKING THAT YARD.......YOU SAW THEM........now girl.......you are in a trouble......


the women whistled and the white bodied creatures.......with blood coming out of their face........tied me to the rope.........
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! YOU CAN'T DO THAT!!!!!!    
HA HA HA [the woman cried]........

those monsters were taking me to that yard.....................noooooooooo!!!!! help OH
!!!! MY GOD HELP...............,,,,,,,I PLEADED FOR A HELP........but......no one was there to help me.........
i was remembering my mother.......as now it was my last trip.......and......'THE END OF M......


[will they kill maria or the mystery of the eyes be solved????..........[to be continued!!!]




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AUTHOR: SHILPI



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the mysterious eyes..............[2]


[Hey friends..........below is the 2nd part of my story ''the mysterious eyes'' u can read the first part below this post......i want you to read it silently.........the story will go lil' longer..i think it will be of 4 or 5 parts........]


 I....OPENED MY EYES...hh!!...slowly very s..l..o..w.l.y.....and found myself lying on a bed........oh!! it was my bed!!!.....................my mother was sitting beside me........with her pale face....watching me.....and her soft hands touching my forehead....again and again.............i could see a person wearing a white coat with the stethoscope around his neck...picked up his bag and disspeared behind the curtain...........
MOM.WHATS????............my mom touched her finger against........ my lips and said to me:don't speak anything.....u
need rest.....your dad is out of station....when i found you not back home at the right time......i went on searching for you...after.1hour i saw you lying 2 yards back.......from the home.i picked you up......and lied you inside the car and then i drove the car back home.......ah!!!! mother stopped taking a long b....breath.......dear......why??? i told you not to go to that yard.... hundreds of times...and u.........but mom!!!!!!!! please dear........no words..you need rest ok.?.....i will talk you .........tomorrow morning.........now common !!!!don't worry i am with you ...come dear drink this soup..your favorite......cabbage soup..........mom i don't.........drink it dear.........you will....feel.........better!!!!!!!

After drinking the soup........i slept down......my mom hugged me.....shut the lights off.......goodnight baby.sweet dreams..........good...night mom.......goodnight.....after that i didn't not saw my mom anymore and closed my eyes......


SUDDENLY........THOSE SILVER EYES................WERE  LAUGHING AT ME.......I WILL KILL YOU KILL YOU..........HA! !HA !!HA.!!................NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

I SCREAMED...................AH !!!!AH!!!AH!!!!!!!I WOKE UP HUFFING..................oh!! how horrible that dream was!!!!!! i glanced the watch....it was 7:00 at the morning.................my mother came rushing towards me after hearing my SCream.........what happened??...wh....?????...........nothing mom[i interrupted.......] nothing.......... just a bad dream.........
i am going to take my bath........!!!ok dear go..........you will feel fresh,, ,,, . yeah!!!!                  
rest of my day went out quietly nothing much happened that day......
my friends,..........oh!!!! no friends at home.......only at school.................it was then 6:00 at that ice cold....bone chilling afternoon,,,,..................i told my mom and went out for a walk.....................................................................................
whaoooo!!!!!! such a beautiful afternoon it was.....i tied my cap tightly against my hairs...to prevent the dew drops........after taking a long nature walk........i felt better........and i almost forgot that incident!!!!!!!
and then............it grew darker and darker..........i decided to go  home...... while moving towards home.....i can see those dark wild trees...and..............HEY WAIT.....SHHHH!!

M  ,........A.R IA............................a sharp voice SCREAMED..................I MOVED BACKWARDS.............NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!I SAW...........GOSH I SAW A .............



  [what is the mystery behind..the eyes?......which the author always dream t of and always saw........
...to know.

wait for the next part of this story.........and please be patient with this story....... i know till now there was nothing much interesting, but.....it is just a start-up of the story .........the interesting part will come soon to you......may be in the next post.....till then happy reading and........don't forget to leave your valuable comment below]
 
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author:  shilpi